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January 31, 2005
Retromediation and Novelty
Frankly, as I read "Remediation, Genre, and Motivation: Key Concepts for Teaching with Weblogs," by Brooks, Nichols and Priebe, all of NDSU, I wondered about the consequences of framing weblogs as remediations of older forms--the journal, the notebook and the filter. What results from a setup of weblogs that calibrates their potential in terms of paper-based corollaries? It's difficult to know exactly how this was framed beyond the evidence we find in the article (the framework, the research narrative, the questionnaire, the data-sets, the conclusion) and in the related links (the weblogs themselves, a syllabus, a reading list, adjacent assignments) so I'm reluctant to respond to the essay with firmly resolved skepticism, especially considering that it reflects some of the earliest uses of blogs to teach writing. Yet through this limited lens, I have doubts about why we need to liken blogs to paper counterparts. What's gained? Is it a way to legitimate composition pedagogy adventurously (inventively, imaginatively!) straying from long-recognized forms, forms often occupying the lion's share of weight in the event-oriented syllabus or program-wide curricular design? Is it a way to call up, for students, a sense of the familiar? Although it is, perhaps to a lesser degree than resonates in this article, necessary at times to present students with a grounding in the familiar, when Brooks et. al. tell us, "we wanted to balance the novelty of the activity with a grounding in familiar literate practices," my initial thought is that a high stakes flattening/deadening/adequation is inevitably brought about. And this, I think, must bear on motivation, if only subtly, tacitly.
What do I suggest instead? Well, it depends on the broader aims of the course. For collective course blogs, I'm less and less inclined to model exemplary entries for the whole class, and rather than talking about what blogs enable by connecting them to the written forms they (more or less) resemble, I prefer to introduce blogs to students in terms of their impact on how we think (sure, paper variations impact thought, too), develop and write with/about ideas and so on (more to this, but I'll let it rest here).
Posted by dmueller at January 31, 2005 10:15 PM
Comments
I think you're on to something, Derek, with the comment about legitimating pedagogy by comparison to existing (and therefore accepted) forms. It seems to me that the last thing "we" want to see happen is for blogs to become just another in the long line of pedagogical debates, that what we need instead is to preserve the sort of chaos and rejection of traditional forms that blogging offers. Someone, I think it was Mike, commented in another post about the potential conflict between the nature of bloging and teaching traditional argument forms. I submit that blogging is an argument, in that "medium is the message" sort of way.
the question then becomes, if we as teachers take to blogging as a primary form, do we risk being denied the "rewards" of the academy, or can we make the case for those rewards without falling into the "historical connection of justification" mode? This, you will recall, was a concern about online teaching (and still is, in many institutions), so it's something I'm curious about how we as students will anticipate and work with.
Posted by: Chris Geyer at February 1, 2005 09:14 AM
One of the things I notice when we (or Brooks et al.) talk about remediation, and something that you both have struck to the heart of, is that blogging mediate the writing in very different ways. I submit that blogs are conversations, as opposed to the oneway street of journals for class, where it's not just
- the teacher responding to student writing
- the students writing to/for the teacher
- the formal oranizing principles of models of exemplary writing (as Derek referred to them)
But instead should be a site
- for students to repond to each other
- for students to write to each other and for the teacher to write as a peer (in so much as that is possible)
- for invention and connection, like a giant mixing bowl
Above all I think that the nature of the writing in blogs, due to audience expanding beyond the teacher, can and should be conceived of very differently. Saddling blogs with the baggage of prior, less dynamic, forms seems to defeat one of the coolest things about them. While we can't do away with the structures of the classroom entirely (the assumption here being a blog assigned as part of a class project) we can increase students' awareness of how ideas turn into writing, how links get constructed and modified, and let them in on the dirty little secret that formal academic writing isn't so much speaking form a position of authority (a.k.a. condescending to the audience) as it is putting voices into conversation on a given plane.
Posted by: TR at February 1, 2005 11:43 AM
Both of your comments lead me to think about the way weblogs refigure audiences. Blogging makes our teaching and, with various ethical repurcussions, out students' writing available to whatever interested audience read or comment, whether administrators, parents, colleagues in other departments, students, folks from beyond the academy, etc. Just tonight in class, I had a student who--in an aha! moment--asked how we can tell who is reading the course weblog I have going in WRT205. Briefly (we're always running out of time in class!), I said that we can look at server data to ascertain who's checking out the blog, which search terms are calling up our course blog entries, and, to a degree how long readers from identifiable IP addresses are looking at the blog (whether they're reading, who knows).
And Tyra, peer-to-peer sharing of writing is, for me, one of the real up-sides of what a blog makes possible. The comments allow for genuine, interested interchanges (although commenting is, in some courses, compulsory).
Posted by: Derek at February 1, 2005 08:42 PM
It is the step up in peer-to-peer sharing of writing that has me excited, as well, D. As we often noticed last semester, unless we were presenting in class with the obligatory handout, we seldom got to look at each other's writing--style or content.
Not only do we get to read each others' writing, but blogging allows us to do the in-the-hall chat in a form where we can lead and follow each other to various points of view, inerpretations of essays, and supplementary articles immediately.
The interesting pedagogical adjustment to think about, I believe, is to recognize that blogging leads to far more reading than before---I'm following links (not making any yet, *G*) and reading far beyond the essays assigned for this week, as well as beginning to get the hang of following all of y'alls comments....how do we adjust our reading expectations of our students if we choose to class blog?
Posted by: di at February 1, 2005 09:03 PM